Rule #38 The Problem A Potential Buyer Says Is Never Real Have you ever taken at face value a "diagnosis" a potential buyer has given you? Don't build the work on the wrong foundations. Be

Who is a guru As mentioned earlier, in any field there are people who are considered to be experts No. 1. They earn inadequately large (by the standards of colleagues) money. They are famous and popular. They receive best clients without any effort. And they set prices

What is an expert? Expert In this book, the word "expert" will be used as a synonym for the word "guru". But still, let's delve into this concept a little deeper. This is necessary in order for you to have the right inner attitude. What is an expert? The person who can

Potential buyer

Introduction to the concept of "potential buyer"

A potential buyer is someone who wants to buy something from you.

Potential buyers are people who may know about your company or you, but have never bought anything from you. How to include them in the orbit of your business?

It's not easy at all. Many small firms fail to truly expand precisely because they fail to capture the attention of potential buyers and turn them into visitors.

For many years, businessmen believed that the main way to compete was to increase the range and keep more low prices than competitors. With some irony, we can say that too much variety and low prices are the two main reasons for the collapse of firms!

Let's explain this idea.

Too much assortment can lead to large inventories, which will affect profitability. Think about where the niche market is for you and what you will actually be selling.

Too low prices for many small and even large firms can be a harbinger of collapse. If you can't compete with Wal-Mart on efficiency, you can't compete on price either. Emphasize your positive sides: specialization, customer service, staff competence, warranty service, home delivery, repair services, gift wrapping, etc. Emphasize your difference from any Wal-Mart if you cannot compete with them on prices.

Let's talk more about the range.

The average person encounters hundreds every day commercial offers: on television, radio, from newspapers, sees them on advertising stands, in taxis and even, as in Sydney, Australia, in the showers of hotel rooms.

More than 15,000 new products enter the market each year, and 90% of them fail to sell!

Consider this: PC owners can choose from over 30,000 programs on offer;

Car buyers can choose from 572 types and models;

If you have a credit card, you get over 300 catalogs between September and Christmas;

There are 13 8 varieties of toothpaste (these are not trademarks, but varieties: in tubes, in single packs, in various colors, for smokers, non-smokers, for people with bad teeth, for tea or coffee lovers, for people with yellowing teeth ...) .

In Consumer Reports, David Pittle writes, "Over and over again we hear about people having difficulty deciding what to buy."

And yet, in some areas of business, a wide range works. Charles Lazarus, founder of the well-known toy company Toys I Us, says: “When parents have no idea what to buy for their child, they go to the department store, where they have the widest choice.” That's fine for a company like Toys I Us, but not so good for a little corner store. It, naturally, will lose in assortment to large firms.

What to do in this case, to lure potential buyer?

For a small entrepreneur, a large assortment can rarely be profitable due to the high cost of inventories.

Let's take a look at another reason why people fail. small entrepreneurs. They are trying to compete with the big firms on prices.

Large enterprises will certainly offer better prices. They have greater purchasing power and lower overheads relative to sales volume and can therefore be successful at very low cost. trade margins. They have already pumped billions of dollars out of the American consumer by saying, "No one can match our prices!" or something like that. In 1993, for the first time, these price-beaters sold more ready-to-wear clothes than specialty stores. For the first time in its 116-year history, Budweiser has reduced the price of beer. To keep its place in the tobacco market, Philip Morris reduced the price of Marlboro cigarettes by 40%.

Can it work? Maybe - but for large firms! Even for such giants as "Philip Morris", the result can be very different. The short-term effect will be expressed in an increase in sales, but in a decrease in profits. On the day that the Marlboro cigarette price cut was announced, the price of the company's shares on the stock exchange fell. Investors did not consider that an increase in the number of potential buyers of Marlboro would lead to an increase in the lower limit of the share price. Even more than a year later, financial analysts are trying to find an explanation for what is now called Marlboro's Black Friday. The market share owned by this company has increased, but competitors do not retreat, in turn reducing the price of cigarettes. As a result, smokers are happy with lower prices, but in general the cigarette industry is becoming less profitable.

Take American Airlines as an example. Year after year, this airline has been ranked at the top of the air passenger surveys. At some point, she decided to increase traffic volumes by lowering ticket prices. This idea seemed quite timely. After all, different airlines have very different fares depending on the time of year (and sometimes even depending on the time of day). Why not replace the puzzle like “at what price should I fly?” introducing easy-to-understand rules? The problem turned out to be that other airlines followed American Airlines' lead. Some small companies such as Southwest Airlines and Alaska Airlines managed to operate successfully because they had no problems with federal taxes and markups that American Airlines had to take into account. Soon she was to return to the well-mastered old methods and rates.

Today's consumers know perfectly well who does what. They will place your company in their mental “scale”, on which they “mark” where to buy what. Renowned authors Jack Trout and Ol Reis call this “positioning”—the process by which consumers envision a “place” for your product in their minds.

As renowned forecaster Laurel Cutler says, “The 1990s consumer is the most intelligent and savvy consumer. We have taught people to think."

The problem with price cuts is that they can lead to a "price war". You will soon find yourself in the position of the Kroger Supermarkets in Cincinnati, who increased their discounts on new foods to the point that pig farmers came to them to buy milk for piglets at five cents a quart, because it was cheaper, than regular piglet feed.

Therefore, the desire to lower prices and increase the range may not be the best way attracting a potential buyer.

What to do?

Below we will give some examples of using certain techniques to attract the attention of a potential buyer to your business. To make it easier for you to understand what to do, we will tell you the story of how we first got into business.

We were quite competitive in terms of prices and assortment, but in our store we limited this competition to a certain category of goods,

When we started, our little baby store had an annual turnover of about $25,000. What would make a potential buyer come to us, passing by a huge department store and a number of large specialty stores? My father-in-law came up with the idea: “Let you have inexpensive goods, but in the widest assortment in the city!”

It was autumn, and we thought about what a person might need for the winter, and not very expensive at that?

What if you try to trade in small things that warm children - mittens, scarves, muffs? It turned out to be what we needed - inexpensively, and we could offer the widest range of these goods in the city!

We decorated the windows ourselves:

"THE BEST RANGE OF CHILDREN'S GLOVES, MUFFS AND SCARVES IN OUR CITY!"

Soon people started coming in and wondering what the best range of muffs and gloves was. While they were in the store, we managed to offer them overalls (we had, perhaps, in the poorest assortment) - after all, the sale of one overall was equal in money to the cost of three dozen pairs of gloves.

Sometimes we were able to sell either a jumpsuit, or a suit, or a girl's dress - all this because we had what a particular buyer wanted, and in the widest range.

So, although we didn't have our own a wide range of all products, we managed to achieve it in something that our customers required.

What have we achieved? We have transferred our Potential Buyer to the rank of Visitor.

You need to make the first favorable impression on the Visitor, and this is achieved by a calm, warm, caring atmosphere. If you succeed, then by doing so you win future customers. If you ignore or, even worse, annoy these Visitors, then you lose them forever. And sometimes, worst of all, they will tell their story of a failed visit to your store to a dozen or more of their friends and pals.

Not so long ago, a supermarket lost our family in this way...perhaps forever. And since we were spending about $100 every week in their grocery department (which means about $5,000 a year, or about $100,000 over the next twenty years), such a loss is quite significant even for a large enterprise.

Here is how it was. We went to the counter to buy some small things. The seller looked and said:

Get a number!

What? we asked.

Get a number! - repeated the seller, directing us to a typewriter like a cash register, issuing tear-off paper numbers. So I'll know whose turn it is.

But forgive me, because there is no one in the hall but us!

If you want to be served, then you must have a number! These are our rules! - once again repeated the seller, already annoyed tone.

We went to the machine and tore off the number - sixty-one,

The clerk glanced at the wall board and yelled, “Next! Sixty-first!"

This is us, - we had to respond, and only then we were served.

What happened? The people who tried to take care of us, trying to create the impression of professionalism and competence, forgot about the human factor. They only remembered that everyone had to "pay by the numbers." This is how robots work, not people. In any case, people should not act like this if they want their potential buyer to rise to the next step and become a Visitor,

How much do you collect per hectare?

Stan Golomb develops marketing programs for dry cleaners, restaurants, dentists, medical services, pizza parlors and many other businesses. When he takes on new clients, he always asks them to think seriously and answer one key question for the business, namely “how much do you collect per hectare?”

“Farmers always calculate yields per hectare,” explains Stan. If the average yield is, say, 50 centners per hectare, then a yield of 30 centners immediately tells him that something is wrong.”

So why shouldn't an entrepreneur compare the results of his activities with "yield per hectare"? In business, this “yield” is calculated in relation to the rest of the market. “Area in hectares” in this case can be the number of transactions in a given market segment that are concluded and executed by one enterprise. Do you want to know how you are doing? Pay attention to your "yield".

Start by defining your market. Your primary market is where eighty percent of your Potential Buyers live. Find out the addresses of 300 of your current customers. From this data, you can estimate where the vast majority of your customers live. If you are a typical small business, over 80% of your customers live within a three to five mile radius of your business.

Then calculate how many families live in your area of ​​the market. Go to the post office - there is data on the number of postmen and how many houses each of them serves. Let's say you have 5,000 houses on your lot. You do business with 1000 clients. This gives a "yield" of 20%, that is, you serve 20% of your potential market. Your task: to find a way to increase the "yield"!

There are two ways to increase it:

1. Increase the number of families served by your business.

2. Convince those families that already do business with you to spend more money on you.

When you have an idea of ​​your market share, you can begin to systematically increase it. Even if all customers in your market are already covered, you still have the opportunity to dramatically increase sales by applying appropriate incentives so that each of them spends 50% more.

Your sales volume will depend on a number of factors:

1. Geographic location of your part of the market,

2. Population density.

3. The level of income of the population in this part of the market.

4. The type of activity in which the population is engaged.

5. The image and style of life adopted here.

6. Ethnic characteristics of the population.

7. The average age of the population.

8. Typical weather conditions in the area,

9. The number of competitors in a given market.

10. Type of competition.

11. The nature of your activities to improve your competitiveness.

The combination of these factors determines why one business has a turnover of $5,000 a week, while another, similar, barely manages to reach two thousand. Whatever factors you have to deal with, you can always increase your "yield".

Think about how farmers increase yields per hectare? Someone increases watering, someone adds fertilizer, someone starts using pesticides to control pests, someone develops hybrid varieties. They sow, cultivate, fertilize their fields, trying to do everything so that the yield per hectare pays off their costs as much as possible. What can you do with your business?

Life forces you to reckon with some unchanging factors. Let's take them as a given. You cannot change the economy of your market segment, population density, its geographical boundaries. It is not possible to significantly change the location of the enterprise or influence the methods of the competitor in the field of prices and discounts on goods or services.

However, much can be done to make your business more successful, and only you can do this through your own actions. You can do nothing, and then you will reap the rewards of doing nothing - nothing will change, except perhaps external factors affecting your business.

Take the dry cleaner industry as an example. Their annual turnover can be very different - from 50,000 to 1,000,000 dollars (most dry cleaners operate within these limits).

But whatever this turnover is, it can be increased by 20, 50 and even more percent. And this is done by analyzing the local service market and corresponding actions.

For example, there is a highway to the north of you. You don't have any clients on one side of it. Located in the south Railway, because of it there are few customers from the south. In the west - a golf course, there are also not many customers there. To the east, your market appears to be bordering on Fairview Avenue. If your business is located in the center of this site on Ogden Avenue, you have to reckon with the indicated boundaries. The only way to attract buyers is to send them flyers, as well as phone calls. In doing so, pay special attention to appearance your store: windows, signs, interiors, the rumor about which will be transferred from visitor to visitor. According to a recent survey, four out of ten potential buyers decide to do business with you based on the appearance of your business.

Once you have an idea of ​​your market area, like a farmer has about the yield in his field, you can start thinking about how to cultivate that “own field” to increase yields and, consequently, profits.

Interview with Sid Friedman

If something doesn't want to change, change that "something"!

Sid is one of the world's leading insurance agents. When we want to understand how to find Potential Buyers, we call Sid. He manages thirty insurance agents, but still personally distributes insurance policies. In his lectures and seminars, the most frequently repeated phrase is "if something doesn't want to change, change that 'something'!"

What does Sid mean by this?

Nothing more than the following: “It is not enough just to do what everyone does. And more importantly, it’s not enough to simply repeat what has worked before.” Peter Draker writes that "every enterprise must be ready for change ... in everything!"

The fact that some idea, concept, theory worked in business for many years does not mean that it will continue to be suitable. This is a kind of part of the philosophy, expressed in the words "the only constant essence is change!"

Sid Friedman's desire for change extends to his vision for the future. We talked with him, trying to figure out how he became one of the leading insurance agents.

Question: How do you determine the contingent of people who may need your services?

Answer: I do targeted marketing. I find people who are somewhat similar to each other. I cannot say that my market is all around. I live near Philadelphia, but this is not my market. Just as it is neither New York nor Atlantic City.

My market is people who have something in common with each other. So if I want to involve funeral directors, I go where they are. I go to their meetings, speak there. I write articles for their special magazine. When I manage to understand their life and work, and they understand me, then a certain relationship is established between us.

As soon as I manage to get one manager as a client funeral home then I can go to the next one. I go to my only client so far with a list of funeral directors and say, "Joe, do you know anyone else on this list that I could talk to and offer my services to?" I go to those people who trust each other and use their connections with each other.

I am very careful with whom I work with and to whom I offer my services.

My market is not all people. You can, of course, act randomly and achieve a certain success, but in this case you can be compared to that single spermatozoon out of a billion of its kind, which fertilizes the egg, and this happens purely probabilistically. I don't want to be like that. It's pointless. I prefer to know in advance which sperm will work and use only that.

Question: What can you say about those who have already used your services once? Are you doing something special to encourage them to contact you again?

Answer: Of course, We mutually sell services to each other. I'm not just an outsider, you become an important person to me. Now I'm trying to keep you - this is the number one task. How exactly am I trying to keep you? I send birthday greetings letters using phrases like: “I saw an article here and I think it might be of interest to you.” By informing you about any events that may be of interest to you,

Since you bought A, and I think B, C, D, or E might also be useful to you, I'm trying to see you and let you know. For example, if you bought group insurance from me, then I can talk to you about an additional pension contribution, annuity insurance, monthly contributions to Pension Fund You will know that this is what I do too. I don't expect you to buy my services every time I call, but by doing so, I am suggesting that when you decide to buy something, you may well turn to me.

Question: Do you exclude from consideration some segments of the potential market to find those who really need your services?

Answer: It all starts with planning, doesn't it? Can I pull the trigger without knowing what I'm aiming at? Everything happens by no means according to the principle: “Attention! Fire! Hit!" If I know what I want to achieve, then I must consider whether the client can afford my services, does he have enough income, is his business profitable? If profitable, is the client the type of person who cares about the future? Will they buy my services when I visit them? No way in the world will I deal with engineers - I just don't know how to work with them.

Personal characteristics, biographical features, place of residence, environment- everything has to do with the process of identifying the area of ​​the market that I would like to work with.

Question: Many are not willing to disclose the details of their financial position. How do you manage to overcome this barrier in order to assess whether a potential client can use your services?

Answer: I don't think that the reason for their reluctance to share information of this kind with me lies in the presence or absence of some kind of desire, It's just that this is the public. I know that dry cleaning business owners all over America, as well as all over the world, make a lot of money. Owners of several dry cleaners make even more money. If I wanted to get these Potential Buyers as clients, I would target the dry cleaning industry as a whole. I would find where they gather for their meetings, find the opportunity to be there as an invitee, in general, somehow infiltrate their environment. I would tell them that I would like to be involved in their business, reveal what they like and what they don't. I would start writing articles for their professional magazine, speak for free at their events. I would strive to become necessary for them, then they could become necessary for me.

I always have a plan of operation. I don't know how you can win battles without having such a plan. Although this is not a war, strategic planning is necessary before moving on to drawing up a specific plan of action.

Question: How do you deal with dissatisfied customers who got in trouble because of you?

Answer: Whoever has problems, I give my home phone number. This is the responsibility of the president of the firm. He is the main person when complaints and claims arise. Two things must be brought to the attention of the president: one is when someone on the staff is acting in a questionable way, and the manager should know about it, and the second is when the client has a serious problem, and the only person who can do something is company president.

Question: Are your employees doing the same marketing as you?

Answer: Not all. I would like them to carry it out, as this could make their lives much easier and help them earn more. It seems to me that you can earn much more on services than directly on sales. At the stations Maintenance more cars are sold than in car dealerships.

Question: What special efforts do you make to close the deal?

Answer: One client told me that he would not be able to meet with me, as he was flying to Chicago. I asked him:

What time are you leaving tomorrow morning?

Airplane at 7 am, flight 1260 Philadelphia-Chicago.

Then I asked if I could fly with him, to which the answer was yes, of course. I called the airline, booked a ticket and found myself in a seat next to the person I needed. Thus we got two hours for business negotiations. I got off the plane with the concluded contract and gratitude from the client for the readiness to meet his circumstances. I flew home on the next flight.

So I did it repeatedly. I even had to fly to Los Angeles. In this way, I got a client for myself - two hours to Chicago and six hours to Los Angeles. After all, this is my client. He belongs to me. He has nowhere to hide, he cannot get rid of me, he cannot evaporate. He has no choice but to sit in a chair next to him.

Finishing the conversation with Sid Friedman, we present fifteen of his secrets on how to win the trust of the client.

1. Promise less, deliver more. Otherwise, the following may happen,

The average customer buys five insurance policies during their lifetime, from four different insurance agents. This happens because:

3 percent move to another place of residence;

For 5 percent, marital status changes:

9 percent refuse your services because someone offered a better price:

14 percent were disappointed in the product or service they bought:

68 percent refuse your services due to inattention and indifference to the needs of the client,

2. Always give a 100% guarantee. If we were forced to live with a 99.9% guarantee, we would drink unsafe water for an hour every month, there would be two risky plane landings at Chicago airport every day, 16,000 letters would be lost every hour, and every week there would be 5 0 0 incorrect surgeries.

3. Always and in everything be a professional. Professionalism is visible in the actions and knowledge of

how to achieve the goal. A professional always tries to achieve the best re

As a result, the Professional is always dissatisfied with himself.

4. Always have a notebook with you. If you hear or read something and like it, write down that idea or phrase.

5. Treat your life as an exciting journey. Monitor your business growth. Be who you want to be. First, determine the destination. What is your goal? Second, are you aware of your strengths and weak sides? Third, plan your trip.

6. Have the courage to dream big. See color dreams. Imagine what you are trying to achieve, Consider it in every detail. Draw, And the most ordinary people are capable of extraordinary things.

7. Above all, be yourself. You should not strive to "become me". In this case, you will be a second-rate copy of me. You are the original. Borrow some traits from those you admire. Mentally replay events like a tape. What does not suit you, simply erase from this tape. 8. Control your time - thus you will be able to manage your life. This is done as follows:

Draw three columns on a piece of paper. In the heading of the first column, write "URGENT", in the heading of the second - "IMPORTANT", and in the third - "OTHER". Always carry this leaflet with you.

9. Remember the four rules for controlling your time (the HR principle*). Fold all documents from your desk in one stack. Now take the top one - you won't put it aside until you

Execute it, or

Postpone it to the future (but put a date on when you do it), or

Pass it on to someone else to execute, or

Destroy it.

10. Find out what everyone else is doing and don't do it. Stop competing. Start creating.

11. So form your image, image, so that others associate it with all the best. So work on yourself so that people start to take an example from you. Work on eliminating negative traits in your character and behavior.

12. Be able to recognize the behavior of losers. The following are some well-known behavioral characteristics of underdogs:

They are too busy with themselves, they don't have time for anyone else;

They cannot bear any responsibility;

They differ in inflexible behavior:

They do not perceive the picture as a whole, do not dare to invade an unknown area;

They refuse to obey, would rather lose than follow instructions and win;

They are lazy, will not spend a drop of their talent and time without asking for a raise;

They only criticize and shame others, constantly look for excuses for themselves and say that these problems are unsolvable.

13. In contrast, here are the characteristics of the winners: they have a sense of humor; they don't give up until they've done their job: they do whatever it takes to succeed; their lives are well balanced. In life, besides work, there are many other things;

They are goal oriented;

They perfectly understand how you feel, sincerely give you all their attention;

They have a correct idea of ​​themselves, a good psychological state.

14. Don't take yourself too seriously, but take your business seriously.

15. Whatever happens, I can do it. Just eight words that will provide you with a guide for life.

Funds mass media: newspapers

Attracting Potential Buyers through newspaper advertisements

Throughout the book, we will give you tips on how to use different media to gradually turn Potential Buyers into Advocates of your business. Let's start with newspapers, since they are a fairly simple way to attract the attention of Potential Buyers.

FACT: Newspapers reach more than 113 million adults every day in the United States. On average, six out of every ten people claim to read them cover to cover. Nine out of ten read only the most important news. If your business is looking for clients based on their gender, remember that nine out of ten men read sports pages, and eight out of ten women read leisure, gossip and entertainment pages.

The majority of newspaper readers are newspaper subscribers (seven out of ten), which means guaranteed home delivery of newspapers to your Potential Buyers, unlike radio or TV, which only reach their ears and eyes if the viewer or listener turns on the TV or radio .

Newspapers are a very important medium for your business because more money is spent on advertising in newspapers than advertising in any other medium - approximately $34 billion a year.

Because so many people read newspapers every day, newspaper advertising can be a great way to introduce Potential Buyers to your product or service.

On a national scale, newspapers eat up about a quarter of all funds spent on advertising, but if we talk about local advertising, then newspapers account for about half of all money allocated for advertising (followed by television and the so-called "yellow pages" - a special type of telephone directories, each of which accounts for 13%.

Below we will give some recommendations on how to write headlines, text and illustrations for advertisements, that is, we will share the experience that we have gained over the years in attracting the attention of Potential buyers to your business.

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Before turning a newspaper page, the reader's attention lingers on it for an average of four seconds. During those four seconds, he primarily looks at the headlines of the articles. Therefore, it is best to write the title in such a way that the reader has a desire to read it to the end,

An ordinary woman reads only four advertisements in a newspaper, so the essence should be placed in the headline - what is new, freshest, only, paramount, using such keywords that can get a potential buyer to read your ad.

1. Promise a benefit or arouse curiosity. Remember that people buy only two things in the world: solutions to their problems and pleasant sensations. Think about these two criteria the next time you sit down to write an advertisement for your products and services. Emphasize the benefit that a person will receive by buying your product, not the properties of the product itself. If the shoe you are selling has a cushioned insole (product feature), say it is "shock-absorbing" (benefit). If the suits you sell are made from a blend of synthetics and wool (property), say they are "year-round" (benefit). Advertisements with headlines promising benefits are read by four times as many people as those with headlines that promise no benefits. Charles Mills, vice president of O. M. Scott, the world's largest turf grass grower, says, "People are interested in their lawns, not our seeds."

2. If possible, indicate the name of the product in the title. It's the name of the product, not the name of the company. Put your name somewhere else in the ad, but not in the title, unless it has some special meaning. “ONLY IN (store name). YOU WILL FIND (product name)." Most people like to see their company name in the header. advertisement, although the lower part is no worse for this. Be sure to include your address, phone number, and the name of the person you can contact for more information.

3. Well (and often better than a short one) a long headline is perceived. Headlines longer than ten words read much better than short ones.

4. Don't try to be smart just for show. One recent ad for cars with catalytic converters was headlined "ARE YOU ALLERGY TO CATS?*" A reader with such an allergy will certainly pay attention to this ad, but it has nothing to do with cats.

5. Be guided by any "main idea". The great advertising expert, David Ogilvy, said, “Unless your advertising campaign is built around some basic idea, it will wander in the dark like a ship in the night.” You must find something special that is in the product you advertise. The more of these "highlights" you put in the ad text, the easier it will be to sell the product.

6. Only sell one idea at a time. Otherwise, you will only confuse the reader.

7. Appreciate the word "new". The product is "new". New solution. Ads with the words “new”, “new” in the title perform 20% better,

8. Use specific words in your ad title because they work. These words include (but the list is not limited to): new, free, amazing, just appeared, guarantee, you, now. If your advertisement is addressed to a specific audience, then also indicate its name in the title (asthmatics, rheumatism patients). Here is an example of a “working” headline: “TWO MONTHS AGO I WAS CALLED BADDLE.” You can be sure that bald men will pay attention to such a headline,

9. Include an indication of the local origin of your item. Supermarkets advertising the sale of local products report a sharp increase in turnover. People like to identify with a local product. They are proud that they buy "their own". It is for this reason that Senator Mondale won the election in Minnesota and Dukakis in Massachusetts, although they lost in almost every other state.

10. "Don't show off." Double entenders, puns, headlines that are designed to attract attention but are not meaningful do not work. There were commercials on cable television in which famous people said things like “Murphy Brown is 60 minutes on.” Each of these advertisements began with the template “Okay, although this is not true, but if it were for real ...” Most people immediately stop paying attention to such advertisements. We once wrote the headline for an advertisement for winter overalls that were purchased in Finland like this: "TO PROVIDE YOU WITH THESE OVERALLS, WE HAVE BEEN TO HELSINKI AND BACK". You can’t say anything, it’s funny, but she didn’t contribute to the sale of overalls.

A week later, we ran the same ad again, but the headline was changed: IN THE THIRTY YEARS OF OUR COMPANY, WE HAVE NEVER SOLD THIS ONE PIECE IN SUCH A SHORT TIME. This headline helped us sell sixty-three overalls. People read this headline and said, "These jumpsuits must be something amazing!"

11. Place the title under the illustration. Why? Because that's how people read. Take a look at any newspaper or magazine. If your ad looks like an editorial, then the readership immediately increases.

12. Don't capitalize headlines. If you type your ad title in lowercase letters INSTEAD OF TYPEING IT LIKE THIS, you will also increase your readership. This happens because a person is used to reading exactly lowercase letters, which are typed this proposal. Yes, of course, the heading will be typed in large typeface size, but still in lowercase letters.

13. The title should be clear. John Caples, headline writer and former vice president advertising agency "BBD&0", said: "When people see your ad, they think of completely different things." Don't make them think. Make them act.

14. The title must be believed. I will believe the headline "HOW TO LOSE 5 KILO IN TWO WEEKS" and not believe "HOW TO LOSE 5 KILO PER DAY". That's the difference.

15. The title should have been designed for your contingent. For young mothers and grandmothers in their sixties, the headlines of advertisements should be different.

16. Tell a story. People like to read different stories, and if your story is interesting, then the headline can get them to read the whole text. Here is the headline we used for the male ad. work clothes: "THE FIRST TIME WE SAW THEM AT THE CRILLON HOTEL ON THE PLACE DE LA CONCORD IN PARIS." And so it was in fact. The first time we saw these thick, rough overalls was on a hanger in the hotel bathroom. Back home, we ordered them for our store and our title helped us sell them!

17. Problem solving. It dawned on us that on children's raincoats you can place the initials of the child in the form of a monogram. Most children's raincoats are predominantly yellow in color and cannot be distinguished from each other in the school locker room. Therefore, your child often returns home in someone else's raincoat. Our headline read: "THIS CLOAK IS NOT MISTAKEABLE BECAUSE YOUR NAME IS ON IT." They sold out in three days!

18. Fulfillment of a dream. John Caples wrote the classic, "THEY LAUGHED WHEN I SIT AT THE PIANO." The ad helped sell a mail-order piano course.

20. Last but not least, don't forget the headlines! If you think this is just ridiculous and it doesn't happen, take a look at car ads and food products in your local newspaper. They either have no headings (only the company name at the top), or are full of meaningless phrases like "MIDWINTER CLEARANCE", which means absolutely nothing.

In conclusion. Try different titles for the same product. John Caples said that when he tested different options, one of them could be twenty times more effective than the others.

For many years, sets of four notebooks were successfully sold thanks to the ad "BUY THESE FOUR NOTEBOOKS FOR ONLY 99 CENTS", until someone offered the same product, but with an ad that worked much better: "BUY THREE NOTEBOOKS FOR 99 CENTS - THEN ONE, ADDITIONAL, YOU WILL GET FOR FREE!"

Only one in ten readers will read the text of your advertisement. The whole art of the headline is to get attention and keep it while reading the first few paragraphs. If you succeeded while he reads the first 50 words you write, then most likely he will read the next 250. Do not underestimate the power of the impact of words, even a single one. Here are some examples.

Shampoo sales were doubled by a single word. The instructions said, "Wet your hair, apply shampoo, and rinse thoroughly." And the clever copywriter added one word: “Repeat.”

Well-known businessman Elmer Wheeler was famous for his inventing various phrases that increased turnover. One diner wanted to increase sales of milkshakes. In those days, some customers wanted to add an egg to the milkshake, which naturally increased its price and, accordingly, the profit of the enterprise. Wheeler came up with something that tripled sales: when a customer ordered a milkshake, the cashier would ask, "Would you like one egg or two?" - to which almost everyone answered: “with one” (and some - “with two”),

The cosmetics firm Helen Rubinstein couldn't understand why the big department stores were turning down the free shopping apps that the firm offered them. We analyzed the problem and gave the answer:

You have used two incorrect expressions. First, the headline read: A GIFT FROM HELEN RUBINSTEIN. It shouldn't be like that. The gift must come from the specific department store where it was offered.

Second, if your store high level, do not offer buyers " free coupons". Such coupons are given in supermarkets. Do you give gift certificates? The same product, but the words are different. By making these simple changes, Helen Rubinstein ensured that nearly every department store took part in the advertising campaign products of this company.

When you visit Disneyland, you are not a customer or a customer - you are a guest. One simple word dramatically changes the level of treatment - after all, people are much nicer to guests than to customers.

I like what our British relatives call Insurance companies engaged in life insurance, "insurance". In this sense, it seems to me that I pay money to "insure" and stay alive, while the name of American similar firms says that I will win only if I die.

So, when you take on the text of your advertisement, remember the importance of each word.

Here are twenty tips to help you make great ads.

1. Get on with what matters most…as soon as possible! This is what most advertising educators can teach you. It is necessary to "load" the first three paragraphs as much as possible. The beginning of your text should emphasize the benefits that were reported in the title.

2. Write in short sentences. No more than twelve - fifteen words. Paragraphs should not be very long, consisting of two or three sentences. This will allow you to have enough free space on the area of ​​​​your advertisement and make it more accessible for perception. Remember that the reader is not "reading" but rather "skimming through".

3. Do not type wider than three inches (about 10 cm). This is due to the fact that just such a space is covered with one glance. This is especially true of the usual newspaper font (11.5 points in size).

4. Don't exaggerate. Don't try to prove that your product is "sweeter than sugar". Promise less, deliver more.

5. Be specific. Kipling's "six faithful servants" are still working - What, Where, When, Who, How and Why *:

I have six servants

Agile, remote

And everything I see around

I know everything from them.

They are at my behest

Are in need.

They are called: How and Why,

Who, What, When and Where.

6. Speak as if you were speaking to someone at home simply, freely, clearly.

7. Type your text in a serif font. This is how the text is written. It has a special “serif” at the end of each letter, which makes the text more convenient for visual perception. And THIS TEXT is typed in a sans serif font. You can see for yourself how difficult it is to perceive.

9. Write in present tense. Never use the past tense. The present tense implies that everything is happening right now, while the past symbolizes something outdated, of no use to anyone.

10. Use understandable words and famous names. I once wrote an advertisement for a new song that said, "...this is the best music I've heard since Glenn Miller died." I showed this text different people, and almost everyone who was not yet thirty asked: "Who is this Glenn Miller?"

11. Use the recommendations of those who actually buy your product. Using neighborhood customers in ads is much cheaper than using celebrity names, and almost as effective as them. (“Look, here is a photograph of Mary Simpson! Because I know her ...”)

12. Specify the price. Once we prepared an advertisement for children's mouton fur coats. They were very expensive, and the advertiser advised us not to list the price. We persuaded her: “Then why did you buy them if you are not sure that you can sell these fur coats?” Nine out of ten newspaper readers say that price influences their buying decisions and product choices. If you do not specify a price, you will not be able to influence Potential Buyers.